DISCOUNT SENTENCES: Definition, Characteristics, Brief Examples

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Did you know that in Indonesian rules there is a sentence called discordant? Although the layout is often inappropriate, discordant sentences are one type of sentence that needs to be understood so as not to be misplaced.

Maybe subconsciously, you have made this type of sentence in a paragraph. In order not to be confused, the following is a complete explanation of the term.

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Definition of Contributing Sentence

Definition of Contributing Sentence

Referring to the large Indonesian dictionary, discordant sentences are also called sentences whose existence is not related to the main sentence.

It can also be interpreted as a sentence that is actually unnecessary because it does not support the whole point of a paragraph.

There are also those who call it an incoherent sentence, which appears as a result of the author's loss of focus or is deliberately placed to achieve certain goals. For example, for fishing

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Characteristics of Contributing Sentences

Characteristics of Contributing Sentences

Although its existence does not match, it is still necessary to understand that this sentence has characteristics that are easily identifiable. So that it can be distinguished later, with the main and supporting sentences. What are its main characteristics?

1. Contrary to Main Idea

The point is, this sentence if examined is contrary to the idea outlined in the entire paragraph. So, if it is deleted, it will not change the essence of a written idea.

2. Not Relating to Main Idea

Apart from being contradictory, this sentence also usually has nothing to do with the main idea. For example, the main idea is to talk about football but suddenly there are sentences explaining things outside of football.

3. Stand Alone Without Relation to Other Sentences

When the sentence was found, it was not related to the sentence before or after. So it tends to stand alone, with a different discussion from the overall information in the paragraph.

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How to Find Concise Sentences

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How to Find Concise Sentences

To find a discordant sentence is very easy. You just need to do the following ways.

  1. You must first read the entirety of a paragraph, to determine in advance what the main points are covered. Then which is the main sentence that provides an explanation of the main idea?
  2. Next, re-read each sentence in the paragraph. Check one by one, whether they have a relationship with each other and refer to the main idea or not. If you find a sentence that discusses things outside the context of the main idea, then it falls into the category of discordant sentences.
  3. After finding one sentence out of sync with another sentence, understand it further. Is the sentence really discordant because of the author's mistake in expressing the idea or was it intentionally included as an effort to get something? feedback
  4. Mark the sentence after understanding that it is a discordant sentence

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Contributing Sentence Example

Contributing Sentence Example

Maybe you are still a little confused to determine which sentences are discordant and which are not. To be clearer and understand, here are some clear examples of the existence of this sentence.

Example 1

  • At the beginning of 2022, the Toyota Avanza recorded the highest sales record in Indonesia, which was 7,965 units. (2) As one of the popular MPV category cars, this number has not been surpassed by cars of its class in recent years. (3) Moreover, the enthusiasts come from various circles because it has complete features, is fuel efficient, and is relatively affordable. (4) Toyota has been around since 1937 and released many great cars.

Where is the discordant sentence in the paragraph above?

If examined more deeply, sentences 1,2,3 have a relationship with each other, namely informing about the Toyota Avanza.

While the fourth sentence is not related because it explains another theme, namely when Toyota was founded. So it can be concluded that the category of discordant sentences is sentence number 4.

Example 2

  • Akhtar is a child who likes badminton. (2) Every day he always finds time to play badminton, with friends and relatives at home. (3) Akhtar has also joined a well-known junior badminton club in his area. (4) Akhtar does not like to eat meatballs. (5) He has a dream to become a professional badminton athlete. (6) Therefore, he is tireless to hone his skills to become the best badminton athlete.

Where is the discordant sentence in the paragraph above?

You need to identify the main idea first, namely Akhtar who likes badminton.

The first sentence is the main sentence, while sentences 2 and 3 are supporting sentences that still explain Akhtar's love for badminton.

In the fourth sentence, there is something odd where the discussion is about Akhtar's favorite food. While the fifth sentence discusses again about his dream.

It can be concluded that the discordant sentence is number 4.

Example 3

  • Every rainy season, several areas in Jakarta are flooded. (2) The main reason is due to garbage that has accumulated and the flow of water is not smooth, causing rainwater to stagnate everywhere. (3) in Jakarta there is a National Monument whose top is covered with gold. (4) The overflowing of the Ciliwung River is also one of the reasons for the floods that always hit the capital. (5) Various efforts have been made by the government, but the best solution has not been found.

Where is the discordant sentence on the information above?

The main idea is about the flood in Jakarta. Sentences 1,2,4,5 describe the same main idea. Meanwhile, sentence 3 has a different focus of discussion, namely about Monas. So it can be concluded that sentence 4 is a discordant sentence.

Example 4

  • Many people keep cats because they are cute and adorable. (2) Caring for it is also relatively easy and fun for lovers of these furry animals. (3) Cats have also become one of the most favorite pets in the world besides dogs and other animals. (4) There are also many types of cats, so anyone can choose what kind of cat they want to keep. (5) cats do not like to eat vegetables and fruit. (6) Nowadays, getting a cat is already very easy because pet shop many offer cats at affordable prices.

The discordant sentence in the paragraph above is sentence 5 because it is not related to the main idea about cats as favorite pets. While sentences 1,2,3,4, and 6 are interconnected and have the same main idea.

Example 5

  • I don't like math. (2) Indonesian language lessons are easy to understand. (3) Mathematics has many formulas that are difficult for me to understand. (4) Even though I have had private lessons with a reliable teacher, my math scores have never been good.

How about this one example? If understood thoroughly, sentences 1,3,4 are sentences with the same discussion. While sentence 2 has nothing to do with the three sentences.

It can be concluded that the discordant sentence is sentence number 2 which actually discusses Indonesian language lessons.

Do you already understand the slang sentence? With a complete explanation above, at least you can be more careful when writing an article so that there are no types of sentences in it because it will confuse the reader.

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